满分读后续写讲义-2024届高三英语一轮复习

满分读后续写

1.使用非谓语动词形式, 句子凝练高端
①She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (非谓语动词)
→She walked out of the lab, followed by many students.
②They sang and laughed as they went back to school. (非谓语动词)
→They went back to school, singing and laughing.
2. 运用定语从句, 增加细节, 填补内容
①You’d better make full preparations before class and have a brief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class(使你容易通过这门课).
②Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中国文化会有更清晰的认识).
③I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese school. It is on the third floor with three rooms, one of which is bedroom(其中一个是卧室), and the other two are bathroom and kitchen.
3. 巧用倒装, 增强句子的表现力
①Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (倒装)
→Weak as/though I am, I’ll make the effort.
②He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (倒装)
→No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.
4. 恰当使用强调句, 增强说服力
①He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. (强调句)
→It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.
②It is working in teams instead of on my own that has freed me of trouble and made my work more efficient. (强调句)
5. 自如应用各种名词性从句, 精彩纷呈
①To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (主语从句)
→What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
②I have just found that I have to attend an important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午得参加一个重要会议).
6. with or without精彩点缀, 妙不可言
①As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标) is like sailing without a compass.
②I can’t thank you enough for your generous help, without which I couldn’t have made such great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么大的进步).
7. 巧用副词, 充分表情达意
①She patiently(耐心地) explained all the rules to the students and required everyone to follow them.
②We were perfectly(完全地) satisfied with the result of the experiment.
8. 变主动为被动, 凸显英语思维
①At most five books can be borrowed(可以被借用) at a time and they can be kept(可以保存) for ten days.
②You are allowed (被允许)about ten minutes to prepare for the work.
9. 语气委婉而中肯, 易于接受
①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework.
②What do you think of it? Are you satisfied with it? If not, please tell me as quickly as possible(请尽快告诉我).
一、倒装句
Not until that moment did I realize what a big difference one small gesture had made to him.
Hardly had I finished my words when the young man said, “No problem. I will send him to the hospital.”
Had it not been for your help, we couldn’t have finished the work ahead of schedule.要不是你的帮助，我们就不可能提前完成任务。
In the corner stood the first wife in a mixture of fright and annoyance.（地点倒装）
Never had she predicted one day she would be changed into a silent fish.
Never had they been so overjoyed that infectious laughter could be constantly heard.
It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions.
Weak as/though she was, she struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance.
So astonished was the man that he couldn"t believe his eyes.
So ashamed was I that...
So freezing cold was the icy water that I was anxious to climb out by myself, but countless previous failures froze me from struggling again.
It was not long before we began sweating.
二、强调句
it was their Bama that relieved us of sorrow.
三、完成时
Having got my son’s dormitory number, he hung up the phone.
四、感叹句
How grateful we were for his kindness!
五、定语从句
Now that we made it to the hospital, he said he’d better go back the campus，where the store was closed.
We also found a small store, where there were all kinds of items that students would need.
There were old but wonderful buildings，which surely experienced time and weather.
Those special homemade desserts attributed to Misty’s inspiration brought our family some incomes, which straightened our situation.
Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me stunned.
六、With…表示状态
With my eyes sparkling, I regretted with endless embarrassment, folding my arms around her.
His face beamed with happiness.
Although slow and unsure of step, she moved with deliberation (从容),and there was no hesitation in her gestures.
With butterflies in my stomach, I breathed deeply.
I held my breath and was overwhelmed with thrills. 表达激动
we are not driving along some dark streets, but going at a slow speed with stars dimly shining.
我们不是在黑暗的街道上行驶，而是在星光暗淡的照耀下缓慢前行。
He said with enthusiasm, …
My face turned pale/red and I stood there with my heart beating/racing violently.
she said with a hint of wistfulness (一丝伤感)
七、in…表示状态
I looked around me in desperate search of a friendly face, a smile, anything.
I added in embarrassment for my abruptness.
The old woman’s eyes rounded in confusion.
I exclaimed in surprising disbelief.
"Yes, that"s the correct price," said Count Borselli in an ordinary voice.
八、非谓语-主动(doing)
I felt myself enveloped in cheerful atmosphere, feeling so relieved to put aside troublesome matters.
Looking around, I lay down on the ground, screaming in a loud voice in an attempt to persuade my mother to...
...,busily texting.
“... ,”He complained, frowning.
Tears of relief welling up in eyes, he was thrilled to hug his best friend tightly…
Tears welling up in his eyes, Jerry’s father watched his beautiful little crippled son flapping his arms up and down in the wind, yelling at the top of his voice,
I hugged Joe tightly, happiness and love welling up inside me.
Instead, it seemed that every student was lost in deep thought, tasting the moving life story.
I wiped the tears from my eyes, heart beating wildly.
"That pearl is worth more than fifty thousand pounds," added the Count, trembling with anger.
Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips, eyes shining and face glowing with joy.
…, his eyes twinkling with thrill.
Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale.
Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me stunned.
Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover.
Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night. (现在分词 情绪形容词)
I looked out of the car window, winding rivers, lofty mountains, sunny beaches and deep valleys holding me entirely in their fascination. (视觉 环境描写 拟人)
I poured out our story, explaining that we had been thrown into a world of darkness for the loss of Bama.
I refused to raise my hand, expecting someone else would.
九、非谓语-被动
Frozen with fear, he stood rooted to the spot.
Bathed in the last rays of the sun, all of them burst into laughter.
Moved and feeling sad, the teacher replied. “Your answer is absolutely right!”
Filled with expectation and eagerness, Jerry stared at Eric with obvious pleasure.
Eyes fixed on Susan, I continued, “ ”
Seized by a strong sense of terror/tension/shame, my palms were sweating and I was unable to utter a single word.
十、副词
A sudden rush of shy blood filling the face, she instinctively looked around with the hope of finding the very man to make an apology.
Instinctively, he jumped in.
He was overwhelmingly joyed as he noticed something green among the broken bricks of the house.
The boy seemed genuinely upset by the inquiry.
And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the crowds.
Feeling unbearably cold and exhausted, she had no idea how to cope with the terrible situation.
Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wanted something to eat.
deeply intelligent and breathtakingly beautiful
academically high-achieving student
十一、what 句型
On hearing what she said, the shopkeeper checked the record in a hurry.
十二、形容词独立小句
Desperate and hopeless, Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.
Surely enough, Makcik was lying in bed, unconscious.
Tension-filled atmosphere充满紧张的氛围
十三、动作
When his eyes caught mine, I was able to see fears shimmered in his smiling eyes.
After drowning himself in sorrow for a short time, he uplifted himself and……
I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. They are more noticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as before.
Phil cast a kind look at the boy，placed a comforting hand on his shoulder，and assured him.
His heart lifted at the sight of her.一看见… Catch a glimpse of 看一眼
I sighed and nodded slightly.
I held my breath and was overwhelmed with thrills. 表达激动
Breathe a sigh of relief 松一口气
she went up at a brisk pace.
十四、情感
Words fail to describe the feelings when…语言无法形容当时的感觉
Everyone’s tension released, ...
The tension in the room melted.
Time seemed to stand still, though they were probably there for only two or three minutes.
I was too dumbfounded to react at first, but without any slightest hesitation…
I closed my eyes to enjoy the gentle breeze and the sounds of the clashing waves.
I was wild with joy, overflowing with happiness.
All of a sudden，a warm feeling of sympathy rose up in my heart.
A sense of terror/tension/shame slowly crept upon me.
A flash of grief came upon him/
She was deep in thought and heard little of what was being said around her.
A sense of strength immediately replaced the mounting fear and anxiety in Jane"s mind.
With each visit, I could feel the ache in my heart lessen.
strike a responsive chord with 打动对方的心弦 strike a chord with 引起共鸣
I felt ill at ease; my wrath had simmered away 我感到不自在;愤怒已经渐渐平息下来了
I was ashamed to humiliate myself. I looked at him out of the corner of my eye.
I said to myself, “Courage!” But the words, “pardon me,” stuck in my throat.
At that point, my chest was squeezing with an effort to restrain my laughter.
15、环境描写
We awakened to the sound of birds singing.
It was a nice day with the sun shining mildly and clouds floating leisurely.
Resting on the rocks, we felt the refreshing breeze brushing our cheeks.
...... , with the countless stars twinkling in the curtain of nights 夜幕下无数的星星
The beautiful scenery is beyond description.
The rose gives out a sweet smell, which promises to be a perfect day.
In the distance, we could see the misty cloud rising from the lake, which remains fresh in my memory.
Twinkling infinity of stars and balmy breeze seemed to also celebrate my luck. 无数闪烁的星星和温和的微风似乎也在庆祝我的好运。
we are not driving along some dark streets, but going at a slow speed with stars dimly shining.
我们不是在黑暗的街道上行驶，而是在星光暗淡的照耀下缓慢前行。
..., with a gentle breeze wafted her face.
Falling leaves danced gracefully in the air.
A gust of wind blew her hair.
The dancing snow blanketing the mountain.
In the dim light,
Below us, miles of fields and hills stretched out as far as we could see.
The last leaf of autumn fluttered to the ground like a drop of autumn’s tear, melting silently in his overwhelming sorrow.
秋天的最后一片叶子像一滴秋天的眼泪一样飘落在地上，在压倒性的悲伤中默默融化。
“说”：
Looking around, I lay down on the ground, screaming in a loud voice in an attempt to persuade my mother to...
Miss Lyngate had her nose high up in the air, announcing they cost eight thousand pounds.
"Yes, that"s the correct price," said Count Borselli in an ordinary voice.
"That pearl is worth more than fifty thousand pounds," added the Count, trembling with anger.
Up and down the aisles (通道), I wandered, humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale.
Moved and feeling sad, the teacher replied. “Your answer is absolutely right!”
“Quick! Quick! Remove the motorcycles from the shop，” someone yelled.
While he was eating. I inquired about his past experience.
I exclaimed in surprising disbelief.
I poured out our story, explaining that we had been thrown into a world of darkness for the loss of Bama.
结尾：
The light of the setting sun shone on the boys, witnessing the start of a new friendship.
It dawned on me that never should we underestimate the power of our actions.
I smiled back in tears. Not until that moment did I realize what a big difference one small gesture had made to him.
They may not be pricey but the love behind it counts.
Tulips rose from the ruins and came to bloom again, which suggests that there could again be happiness after so much misery and new life after much death.
Bathed in the last rays of the sun, all of them burst into laughter.
His smile lighted up the house.
范文一
“Do you happen to have a dog?” I asked.“He has no ID.” I added in embarrassment for my abruptness. “Yes. But ... how do you know our boy Bama?” The old woman’s eyes rounded in confusion. “What a coincidence! Our baby is also called Bama.” I exclaimed in surprising disbelief, “My house was frequented by your Bama.” As shocked as I, the young man asked, “Sir, did he cause you any trouble?” , his voice being kind of upset.
“Not at all! Actually, he was a big help.” I said. I poured out our story, explaining that we had been thrown into a world of darkness for the loss of Bama. However, it was their Bama that relieved us of sorrow. The old woman listened in silence and then breathed a long relief. I threw my arms around her tightly, a surge of warmth springing from our hearts. “Bama” returned, bonding us with new friends and helping us go through the darkest time of my life.
范文二
Immediately, the class became excited. Some could hardly wait to tell their seatmates about their holiday trips, eyes shining and face glowing with joy. Those who hadn’t been anywhere bombarded them with inquiring questions. Enormous excitement welled up in every corner of the classroom. Obviously bewildered at the sudden commotion around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face. “Any volunteer to share your story?” asked Ms. Sullivan, whose words I set down on paper for Rafael.
Then Rafael rose and walked onto the platform. Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me stunned. I felt more ashamed to learn that he ran a website to help children with hearing problems than guilty about stupidly thinking disabled people couldn’t be intelligent. Then his voice was lost in a thunderous outburst of applause. Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover.
范文三
Eric ran over to his new friend, Jerry. He reached for Jerry’s hand and caught hold of his arm tightly. He said with enthusiasm, “You are my only friend and I wish I could do something to help you walk and run like other kids.” Filled with expectation and eagerness, （http://www.huadizy.cn）Jerry stared at Eric with obvious pleasure. Turning around, Eric told Jerry to slide up onto his back. Then he began to run across the grass with all his strength.
Carrying Jerry on his back, Eric ran faster and faster. The wind just whistled across their faces. Tears welling up in his eyes, Jerry’s father watched his beautiful little crippled son flapping his arms up and down in the wind, yelling at the top of his voice, “I’M FLYING, DADDY!” The beads of sweat dripped off their faces. Never had they been so overjoyed that infectious laughter could be constantly heard. The light of the setting sun shone on the boys, witnessing the start of a new friendship.
范文四
Suddenly，I remembered the young man in the store. I pressed the phone number with full hope, praying that it would get through quickly. It was just the young man whom I met in the store that answered the phone. Hardly had I finished my words when the young man said, “No problem. I will send him to the hospital.” Having got my son’s dormitory number, he hung up the phone. I dashed out and started the car. On the way, I got the message from the young man , saying he had sent my son to the hospital.
Two hours later, we got to the hospital. My son was getting better due to the doctor’s treatment. The young man was still there. Obviously，he was expecting our arrival. Now that we made it to the hospital, he said he’d better go back the campus，where the store was closed. How grateful we were for his kindness! It was really a touching experience. The courses in the university didn’t start，but we were sure that my son did make a wise choice.